Theres alot going through my mind,
for one this girl,
for some reason I can’t stop thinking about her,
shes like a drug I can’t stop taking,
every second of everyday Im craving it!
I want to keep using and using and never stop,
its so addicting,
I don’t know what it is about it,
its all I think about,
its all I wanna use,
I love the feeling,
I hate the side effects,
but still use and use and use,
all day long.
If it were a real drug,
I would have already overdossed.

Dang….. this was really good. I didnt know you were so good at poetry. Keep it up:)
Woah… dude this is intense is it about…. tha girl at your church??
not bad man good job and way to express your self. like joey said keep it up
hahaha yeah!!